![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Worse, the ending was extremely confusing and open ended. I was often confused as I read, not sure what she had to do or why the plot continued to change. That brings me to my next point: plot line. To add Morpheus into the mix is unnecessary and confusing to the plot line. I understand that there are more books that follow, but Alyssa’s scenes with Jeb were already bad enough. What? Further, Alyssa’s relationship with Morpheus was also unfitting. However, Alyssa and Jeb are in the middle of saving lives and trying not to lose their own lives and they’re cuddling in a boat and making out in front of a tea party. Yes, characters can have these sexual awakening moments (considering Alyssa was a virgin and had never been kissed, this seemed important to her character). There were several things I didn’t like about this book.įirst, I thought the romance(s) and physically romantic/sexual scenes were ill-placed and too frequent. Develop one aspect of the story you enjoyed or disliked (plot, setting, a character, ending). ![]()
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